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Negative effects vs. positive effects of television programs

Advice from older friends vs.peers

Accept idea or not

Playing vs.schoolwork

Being polite to others

Friendlier than in the past

Money vs.friendship

Cars vs.airplanes

Large-size party vs. small-size party

Being patient or not

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Assign homework every day

Building new houses vs.preserving old buildings

Educate vs.entertain(television)

Using mobile phones

Main cause of unhealthy eating habits

Negative effects vs.positive effects of television programs

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Movies and television programs bring more negative than positive effects on goung people’s behawior.

思路拓展

同意

•商业广告让年轻人对消费失去方向

Commercial advertising might cause young people to focus on consuming.

•涉及暴力的影片容易误导年轻人

Visual media today is simply too violent for young people.

•让年轻人变得更为懒惰

Movies,especially television programs, make children and teenages become lazy

不同意

•好的节目可以为年轻人指引正确方向

Good movies/programs could be a compass for young people’s behavior.

•公益广告让年轻人更关心社会

Public service announcements help the gowng to be more concerned about society.

•好的影片所展现的文化可以年轻人学习,改变自己

The culture that movies/programs show could help young people to change themselves for the better.

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Advice from older friends vs.peers

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Compared to advice from peers,getting advice from older friends is more valuable.

思路拓展

同意

•年长的人经验更丰富

Older people have richer life experiences,based on which they can give us mature analysis and advice.

•年长的人遇事更稳重

Older people are mellower in personality compared with people of our own age.

• 年长的人给出的建议更值得借鉴,因为他们会更全面地考虑问题

Suggestions from older friends are more worthy of deferring to since they provide more comprehensive views on the issue.

不同意

•同龄人跟自己有着共同的兴趣爱好

People with the same age share a lot of the same interests.

•同龄人更能理解自己

Peers can understand us better.

•年龄小不表示心理年龄小

Young people do not necessarily have an immature state of mind.

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Accept idea or not

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It is necessary to accept other people’s ideas in order to do well in group works.

思路拓展

同意

•能听进别人意见的人才会进步

Only people who accept others’ideas can make progress in their work.

•不接受别人的意见会降低团队的凝聚力

Team cohesion will be reduced when some members do not follow others.

•不接受别人的意见会让人变得骄傲

Refusing to accept other people’s ideas ends up being arrogant.

不同意

•真理往往掌握在少数人手中

The minority is usually right.

•坚持到底才会成功

It is persistence that is attributed to success.

•更容易树立威信

An assertive person can make people feel the full weight of authority.

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Playing vs.schoolwork

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Parents should dedicate more time playing games or sports with their children instead of helping them with homework.

思路拓展

同意

•保持孩子身体健康

Paronts playing with their children enable them to stay healthy.

•减轻孩子压力

It is an effective way to release stress.

•锻炼孩子合作精神

It is a gateway to help children improve their cooperation skills.

不同意

•增进父母与孩子之间的关系

The relationship between parents and children can be closer by doing schoolwork together.

•家长可以了解孩子学习情况

Parents can gain a better understanding of what their children learn in school.

•提高孩子学习效率

Children are able to study more efficiently.

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Being polite to others

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We are supposed to be polite toothers anytime.

思路拓展

同意

•个人素质提高

Personal quality improves so that everyone is polite to others.

•政府出台政策

Government policies make people be polite to others.

•媒体公益宣传

Public service announcement by the media help people perform politely.

不同意

•现代生活节奏快

Because of the quick pace of life. people cannot be polite to others sometimes.

•人与人之间交流更少导致彼此不能很礼貌

Less communication leads to such a result.

•现代人们压力大

Too much pressure contributes a lot to being rude.

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Friendlier than in the past

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Young penple in the past were more likely to help others than those today.

思路拓展

同意

•随着教育水平的提升,人们帮助他人的意识增强了

The awareness of helping others is improved as education developed a lot.

•现在的年轻人更有能力去帮助他人

Young people today are more capable of helping others.

•政府出台了相关的政策来鼓励人们帮助他人

Some policies are published to encourage people to help others.

不同意

•跟过去相比,现在的年轻人都比较自私,从小被宠坏了

Young people today are not willing to help others as they are so selfish,being spoiled when growing up.

•压力太大让人们不愿意帮助他人

Too much pressure contributes a lot to people’s not helping others.

•现在的人们生活节奏快,他们没有时间去帮助其他人

People today do not have time to help others as the life tempo changes quickly.

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Money vs. friendship

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The rich and the poor can still be good friends

思路拓展

同意

•两个人因为共同的目标成为了朋友,而这与金钱的多少没有关系

Two Persons could be good friends for the same goal,which means money is not the issue.

•两个人有着共同的爱好,所以成为了朋友

The two might share the same interest.

•同样的经历可以让两个人成为好朋友

A similar experience enables two personsto become good friends.

不同意

•财富不同,兴趣一般也不会相同

They will have completely different interests or hobbies for their different

levels of wealth.

•金钱的不同决定了目标和梦想也不一样

The wealthy differences between the rich and the poor mean they have different goals or dreams.

•富人与穷人生活方式的不同导致他们不能成为好朋友

They are not able to be good friends due to their different lifestyles.

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Cars vs.airplanes

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Cars contribute more to people’s life than airplanes do.

思路拓展

同意

•日常生活中汽车的使用频率更为广泛

An automobile can be used for many more different purposes than a plane.

•汽车相对比较便宜,更多人可以买得起

Cars are much cheaper and thus affordable to many more people.

•跟飞机相比,汽车更加贴近人们的生活

Using a car is much closer to people’s actual life.

不同意

•飞机缩短了长距离的旅行时间

Airplanes shortohthe travelling time of long distances.

•飞机打破了地域限制,实现了全球的联系

It intergrates regions,connecting the whole world together.

•飞机的出现完成了之前一些不可能做到的工作(扑灭大火、运输紧急物资等)

Airplanes accomplish some tasks which were impossible to approach by cars in the past.

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Large-size party vs.small-size party

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A big party with many people is better than a small one with friends and relatives only for celebrating an event.

思路拓展

同意

•人多比较热闹

A large number of people can helps to bring life to the party.

•可以扩大社交网

People could enlarge their social networking at the party.

•可以跟更多的人分享快乐

People can share their happiness with more people at the party.

不同意

•和亲朋好友在一起会更舒服

It is more comfortable to enjoy the time with close friends and relatives.

•规模小可以提高派对的质量

There is a trade-off between the size and the quality of the party.

•邀请无关的人并不能真正为一个派对增添人气

Inviting many irrelevant people cannot really activate the atmosphere of the party.

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Being patient or not

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When decide to do something,people should take action immediately rather than wait.

思路拓展

同意

•机会可遇不可求,一旦错过很难再碰到合适的

It is havd to meet some suitable oppotunities.

•马上行动可以提高效率

It can boost efficiency by taking action now.

•耐心会让人们变得懒情

Being patience sometimes makes people become indolent.

不同意

•可以增强自己的规划能力

By being patient, we can plan better.

•耐心可以避免冲动可能造成的严重后果

Serious consequences can be evitable by patience.

•耐心可以避免粗心问题

By being patient, we can avoid the consequences of carelessness.

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Assign homework everyday

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Teachers should assign homework every day.

思路拓展

同意

•老师可以很好地了解学生对知识的掌握情况

It is a good way for teachers to better track students’progress.

•学生可以养成一个良好的学习习惯

It is good for students to develop a regular study habit.

•学生可以更好地巩固知识

Students can better understand what they have learned at school.

不同意

•作业重点并不在于它的数量

The amount of time that is spent on homework is not as important as the quality of the homework assignment.

•学习应该劳逸结合

Students should keep a right balance between studying and relaxing.

•作业太多会让学生产生厌学情绪

Students tend to withdraw emotionally, when they face much homework.

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Building new house vs.preserving old buildings

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For government,building new housing is more important than preserving historical buildings.

思路拓展

同意

•老建筑已经不再适合现代的社会

People have to build new buildings since old ones are not suitable for the present.

•老建筑因年代久远而存在安全隐患

Historical buildings might be dangerous as they are too old.

•老建筑的一些结构不科学

The structures of old buildings might be flawed because of old-fashioned building methods.

不同意

•老建筑代表了国家的历史

Many old buildings are representative remains of history.

•老建筑诠释了过去的文化

Ancient culture can be understood through studying historical buildings.

•一些老建筑有纪念意义

Some old buildings should be preserved since they are worth commemorating.

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Educate vs.entertain(television)

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Television should be used for education but not entertainment.

思路拓展

同意

•从电视中可以获得知识

People could gain knowledge from watching programs.

•从电视中拓宽自己的视野

They are able to expand their mind.

•从电视中可以锻炼自己的思考能力

Critical thinking can be learned from television.

不同意

•教育形式已经很繁多,电视应该用来娱乐并起到解压目的

People are already educated in many different ways, so television should be used for entertainment.

•电视的图像生效特点决定了它的娱乐功能

Television should be designed for entertainment owing to its vivid visual effects.

•电视直观的信息会让人们懒于思考,所以不能用于教育

People will be too lazy to think due to the direct visual images on TV.

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Using mobile phones

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Mobile phones should not be allowed to be used in public transportation.

思路拓展

同意

•公共交通上使用手机会泄露自己的隐私

Using mobile phones might compromise privacy.

•公共交通上使用手机也会影响到其他人

Using cell phones in public transportation may disturb others.

• 公共交通上使用手机可能会干扰信号,比如飞机

Using mobile phones may interfere with other signals, for instance on planes.

不同意

•人们需要随时与家人联系,所以应该使用手机

People have to connect with their families, so they should be able to use mobile phones in public transportation.

•可以解决一些紧急情况

Some emergencies could be resdved by a call from a mobile phone.

•工作需求,需要随时使用手机

Many people have to use mobile phones all the time for work.

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Main cause of unhealthy eating habits

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Unhealthy eating habits are mostly caused by advertising.

思路拓展

不同意

•越来越快的生活节奏让饮食习惯不健康

The quick pace of life is in fact the principal reason of unhealthy eating habits.

•工作压力太大让人们饮食习惯不健康

Too much emphasis on work leads to unhealthy eating habits.

•人们时间有限也让饮食习惯不健康

A bad eating habit might be caused by lack of time.

•现代人缺乏健康的饮食意识

People these days seldom are aware what a healthy diet is.

小技巧

该题目包含了绝对词(mostly caused)。那么采用反驳的角度去论证会比较容易。所以在这个前提下,所需要做的就是再找出另外两到三个因素来“替代”advertisemeust,也就是文章主体段中每段均讨论别外一个“同样严重”或者“更为严重”的因素。上述绘出了一些比较常见的引起不健康饮食的原因。

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