第53章 "WHY DON'T YOU GIVE THEM SOMETHING REAL?"(3)
If you've got any photo-play ideas that are worth talking about,don't go spreading them out like that for Bobby to pick and choose!""Pick to pieces,you mean,"Jean corrected,help it;he's putting on some awfully stagey plots,and they cost just as much to produce as--""Listen here.You've got me wrong.That plot of yours could be worked up into a dandy series;the idea of a story running through a lot of pictures is great.
What I mean is,it's worth something.You don't have to give stuff like that away,make him a present of it,you know.I just want to put you wise.If you've got anything that's worth using,make 'em pay for it.Put 'er into scenario form and sell it to 'em.You're in this game to make money,so why overlook a bet like that?""Oh,Gil!Could I?"
"Sure,you could!No reason why you shouldn't,if you can deliver the goods.Burns has been writing his own plays to fit his company;but aside from the features you've been putting into it,it's old stuff.He's a darned good director,and all that,but he hasn't got the knack of building real stories.You see what I mean.If you have,why--"
"I wonder,"said Jean with a sudden small doubt of her literary talents,"if I have!""Sure,you have!"Gil's faith in Jean was of the kind that scorns proof."You see,you've got the dope on the West,and he knows it.Why,I've been watching how he takes the cue from you right along for his features.Ever since you told Lee Milligan how to lay a saddle on the ground,Burns has been getting tips;and half the time you didn't even know you were giving them.Get into this game right,Jean.Make 'em pay for that kind of thing."Jean regarded him thoughtfully,tempted to yield.
"Mrs.Gay says a hundred dollars a week--"
"It's good pay for a beginner.She's right,and she's wrong.They're featuring you in stuff that nobody else can do.Who would they put in your place,to do the stunts you've been doing?Muriel Gay was a good actress,and as good a Western lead as they could produce;and you know how she stacked up alongside you.
You're in a class by yourself,Jean.You want to keep that in mind.They aren't just trying to be nice to you;it's hard-boiled business with the Great Western.
You're going awfully strong with the public.Why,my chum writes me that you're announced ahead on the screen at one of the best theaters on Broadway!`Coming:
Jean Douglas in So-and-so.'Do you know what that means?No,you don't;of course not.But let me tell you that it means a whole lot!I wish I'd had a chance to tip you off to a little business caution before you signed that contract.That salary clause should have been doctored to make a sliding scale of it.
As it is,you're stuck for a year at a hundred dollars a week,unless you spring something the contract does not cover.Don't give away any more dope.You've got an idea there,if Burns will let you work up to it.
Make 'em pay for it."
"O-h-h,Gil!"came the throaty call of Burns;and Gil,with a last,earnest warning,left her hurriedly.
Jean sat down on a rock and meditated,her chin in her palms,and her elbows on her knees.Vague shadows;of thoughts clouded her mind and then slowly clarified into definite ideas.Unconsciously she had been growing away from her first formulated plans.She was gradually laying aside the idea of reaching wealth and fame by way of the story-trail.She was almost at the point of admitting to herself that her story,as far as she had gone with it,could never be taken seriously by any one with any pretense of intelligence.It was too unreal,too fantastic.It was almost funny,in the most tragic parts.She was ready now to dismiss the book as she had dismissed her earlier ambitions to become a poet.
But if she and Lite together could really act a story that had the stamp of realism which she instinctively longed for,surely it would be worth while.And if she herself could build the picture story they would later enact before the camera,--that would be better,much better than writing silly things about an impossible heroine in the hope of later selling the stuff!
Automatically her thoughts swung over to the actual building of the scenes that would make for continuity of her lately-conceived plot.Because she knew every turn and every crook of that coulee and every board in the buildings snuggled within it,she began to plan her scenes to fit the Lazy A,and her action to fit the spirit of the country and those countless small details of life which go to make what we call the local color of the place.
There never had been an organized gang of outlaws just here in this part of the country,but--there might have been.Her dad could remember when Sid Cummings and his bunch hung out in the Bad Lands fifty miles to the east of there.Neither had she ever had a brother,for that matter;and of her mother she had no more than the indistinct memory of a time when there had been a long,black box in the middle of the living-room,and a lot of people,and tears which fell upon her face and tickled her nose when her father held her tightly in his arms.
But she had the country,and she had Lite Avery,and to her it was very,very easy to visualize a story that had no foundation in fact.It was what she had done ever since she could remember--the day-dreaming that had protected her from the keen edge of her loneliness.